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Post by Inverted Shadow Bomb Eclipse on Oct 12, 2009 9:02:54 GMT -5
I stood in the darkness, scared and alone. No one to protect me. I had....Jennifer...but...she was killed....by Inverted Sonic Flash....now I was alone...prepared for anything to stand in my way. Chapter 1: Jennifer....just...went... I stood near the window of the Space Colony ARK. "Shadow Bomb...what's wrong?" Jennifer asked me. "I...I don't know. I just feel...like I should go down to Earth. Like that was my mission. And on Earth...I was supposed to kill a hedgehog..." I answered. Jennifer just nodded. Then there was foot steps coming to the entrance of where Jennifer and I were. The door was busted open and I saw a army of GUN Patrolers. "Jennifer!" I screamed to her. i grabbed her hand and we started to run, but all the exits were blocked by numerous GUN Patrolers. Suddenly a gray and red blur flashed in the room, pushing through the GUN Patrolers. The blur took Jennifer and threw her in the capsule. I tried to stop the hedgehog but he was too dtrong. He kicked me in the stomach and I fell to the ground. No! How could this be possible? A hedgehog...stronger than me?! The hedgehog set the destination to Earth. The...the capsule...flew to Earth...and that was the last I saw of Jennifer. Chapter 2: I go to Earth
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Post by tailsbrawlgirl on Oct 12, 2009 9:21:59 GMT -5
Cool story!
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Post by tdlurvs2loveu on Oct 12, 2009 9:25:50 GMT -5
Yeah I can't wait to hear more!
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Post by Inverted Shadow Bomb Eclipse on Oct 12, 2009 9:59:44 GMT -5
Thanks.
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Post by Inverted Shadow Bomb Eclipse on Oct 12, 2009 10:00:38 GMT -5
Chapter 2: I go to Earth I kicked the hedgehog away and I went in the capsule. I have to save Jennifer!, I thought. The hedgehog set the destination...to Earth! But why? He may destroy the Space Colony ARK while I'm gone! I shoved him in the capsule also because I couldn't trust him alone. We crash landed on Earth. The hedgehog and I got out. "Don't..ever...shove me..again!" The hedgehog yelled. "Sorry. What is your name?" I asked. "Find that out for yourself, loser," He growled. I looked around for Jennifer. No sign. 'Jennifer?" I called out. I heard foot steps. Then it went quiet. Then I saw someone walk up to me. It was Jennifer. "sHADOW BOMB!" sHE SCREECHED. tHEN SHE SAW the hedgehog and glared.
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Post by Angel The Cat on Oct 12, 2009 10:09:07 GMT -5
Nice story! And I mean it!
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Post by Meredy_Chao on Oct 13, 2009 14:05:29 GMT -5
Yeah I can't wait to hear more!
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taiseam
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Post by taiseam on Oct 13, 2009 14:10:00 GMT -5
Woah! Add more add more!
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Post by Inverted Shadow Bomb Eclipse on Oct 13, 2009 14:20:10 GMT -5
Heh. Thanks. The hedgehog glared back. "Why did you take me here, Shadow Bomb?" He asked. "YOU have to pay for Jennifer on Earth," I growled. "And how do I do that?" He asked. "Well....by having a fight!" "Heh. No way, loser." And with that, the hedgehog trotted off to do it's OWN buisness. Chapter 3: tHE HEGEHOG CONFESSES
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Post by tdlurvs2loveu on Oct 13, 2009 14:25:28 GMT -5
Nice.
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Post by tailsonacruise on Oct 13, 2009 15:03:31 GMT -5
Very boring...this is just like Shadow's story. Make it different.
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Post by Meredy_Chao on Oct 14, 2009 14:11:15 GMT -5
....he doesn't have to if he doesn't want to.
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Post by Inverted Shadow Bomb Eclipse on Oct 15, 2009 14:26:42 GMT -5
Thank you. I'am not sure what to add next.
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Post by Meredy_Chao on Oct 15, 2009 15:06:49 GMT -5
I see. Maybe you can post a thread for ideas or something.
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Post by emojar on Oct 15, 2009 19:27:37 GMT -5
I thought it was supposed to be like Shadow'd story... < I was thinking some cool way of making it so that Shadow Bomb is like a different dimension verision. AND THEN!!! AND THEN having you character and SHadow meet and do something EPIC!!!!
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