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Post by sabiana on Nov 7, 2009 19:04:39 GMT -5
Name: Sabiana Lorraine Prime
Age: 14
Friends: Sabrina Prower, Amy, Metal Sonic
Powers: None yet discovered
Bio: Sabiana was once good, but turned evil by Metal Sonic. She now works with him and is secretly friends with Sabrina Prower and Amy.
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Post by ¢¾¢¾The_Blue_Blur¢¾¢¾ on Nov 7, 2009 20:02:11 GMT -5
This is good. But short.
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Post by william on Nov 8, 2009 15:32:31 GMT -5
*Face desk* What kind of fail is this? I love how you ran out of names and used the same one twice. I also love how your bio tells pretty much nothing about your character. I also love how this so called legend has nothing a legend should be.
Its a brand new start! I mean we got master work here! I mean how nothing about this character makes sense! How nothing is explained at all! ITS GENIUS I TELL YOU! GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Ferocious Demon FoX on Nov 8, 2009 15:43:42 GMT -5
Heh. Fix this up, Sabiana.
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Post by william on Nov 8, 2009 15:56:55 GMT -5
NOOOOOOOO ITS GENIUS!!!!!!!! *Death noted*
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Post by ¢¾¢¾The_Blue_Blur¢¾¢¾ on Nov 8, 2009 15:59:53 GMT -5
Lol yes, Sabiana. Please, if this was your first time, I understand. But...look at the fc template Metal Mario posted.
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Post by william on Nov 8, 2009 16:04:54 GMT -5
*Goes back from the dead* GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay im done >>.
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Post by ¢¾¢¾The_Blue_Blur¢¾¢¾ on Nov 8, 2009 16:08:38 GMT -5
Lol yeah that was getting annoying.
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Post by william on Nov 8, 2009 16:12:23 GMT -5
Anyway the first part of my post basicly explains the flaws of this profile, read them, learn from them, or you can cry about it and call me mean. No matter what I get one of two things, something to do or I get my point across.
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Post by ¢¾¢¾The_Blue_Blur¢¾¢¾ on Nov 8, 2009 16:13:39 GMT -5
I don't think you are mean at all.
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Post by Meredy_Chao on Nov 8, 2009 19:55:47 GMT -5
Um I'm sorry Sabiana but if you don't change this in 3 days, I will move this to denied.
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Post by Meredy_Chao on Nov 11, 2009 9:39:16 GMT -5
I'am sorry but you haven't modified this in 4 days. i gave you a extra day. You are lucky. *moves to denied*
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