Knux's Faults

[knuxfan]

Knux sighed as he looked at the sunset. Suddenly a bat named Rouge sat next to him.
"Did you ever notice how many faults you have, sweetie?" She asked him. Knux, for a while, he was silent. Then he shook his head. Rouge chuckled.
"I'm not surprised, but it's said if you go to someone wise, he will she will tell you how many faults and non faults you have," Rouge told Knux. Then Rouge left.
"That's gotta be a bunch of baloney," Knux said. "It can't be true."

[{**Team EDWARD!!!**}]

(I learned how to roleplay)
I heard talking near a sunsetty meadowy place.

[¢¾¢¾The_Blue_Blur¢¾¢¾]

This is a very poorly made roleplay. I'm sorry, but this is what PX would've said, "You have to make a better roleplay so people will understand, ect."

[knuxfan]

Ok, I'm sorry...--

[Meredy_Chao]

It's fine. Just make it better next time. *lock*

[ikima]

since it's not locked, I make my point in here. You can't say it's a poorly made ROLEPLAY since all there is is an introduction to it. What is poor then is the introduction of the roleplay, not the roleplay itself. It could start bad and could become better a few posts later.

[Edward Cullen Fan]

I agree with Ikima. And, PX should still lock this.