|
Post by william on Oct 19, 2009 12:55:35 GMT -5
"Two words, epic fail." I say with a sigh, at the sheer stupidity and randomness of Tom.
|
|
demon amy
Shadow Fellow
Not recolor is demon
Posts: 89
|
Post by demon amy on Oct 19, 2009 14:17:38 GMT -5
i agree awesome
|
|
|
Post by Tom641 on Oct 19, 2009 15:49:43 GMT -5
Tom turns from Cuddle-crush and says to william "I'm not here to please you ya know." he picks up an item from his backpack. "Ya see this? You know what it is?"
|
|
|
Post by ¢¾¢¾The_Blue_Blur¢¾¢¾ on Oct 19, 2009 15:59:02 GMT -5
I had just walked in. "Tom...Tom..Tom..Tom...stop being retarted and stop scolding them and such like you are their father," I growled harshly. "They are old enough to take care of themselves."
|
|
|
Post by ikima on Oct 19, 2009 16:26:09 GMT -5
(So far you're the worst of all, Tom. This randomness makes no sence in the RP we are in. This making the RP go bad and uninteresting. So far your score is -3. Yes, it's went deep down because you are not following the rules of the RP and you are not in the story well. Did you remember that I said the people will call me professor and not cuddle-crush?)
I look at Tom, taking his jokes as an insult toward us, the teachers. I put my hands on my hips and look at him, this time not pleased ''Tom I believe is your name... Now, you will give me your bagpack, you will sit at your desk and listen to the teachers. Your randomness already makes you lose points on your final score.'' I tell him still keeping my calm. ''Now put whatever you have back in the bag and bring it at the front. You won't have it for a week. You're starting the year badly, dear.''
(And that shows you have problems roleplaying... It's not in every Roleplays that you can go random like this)
|
|
|
Post by ¢¾¢¾The_Blue_Blur¢¾¢¾ on Oct 19, 2009 16:35:32 GMT -5
I put my bag down and went in a seat.
|
|
|
Post by Nina the Collector on Oct 19, 2009 17:07:31 GMT -5
A girl opened the door to the class slowly and peaked in Shyly "um..... H-Hello.... is this....... Uh... Ms... umm..Cuddlecrush's Classroom?" She pokes her head in and examines the class "Has... Homeroom already started? I'm sorry if I'm late... I was held up by a few boys...." She came in, revealing her school uniform, that carries a fascinating Gothic touch to it, her Hair was blue and in two long pig tails, she looked almost like one of the dolls she carried around in her arms, she caught the attention of not only boys but several girls.
|
|
|
Post by ¢¾¢¾The_Blue_Blur¢¾¢¾ on Oct 19, 2009 17:24:19 GMT -5
(Excellent entrance) I stared at the girl, but then my attention snapped back quickly to the teacher.
|
|
|
Post by Tom641 on Oct 19, 2009 17:35:52 GMT -5
"The only rule i've broken is that i have not called you 'professor', but i am sorry that I seem to be breaking those rules so here." He handed her his backpack. "Here you go "Professor". next time I nearly kill myself trying to get here when i'm late, i'll be sure not to clean up the mess." I hand her the gun from the depths of the backpack. the side reads "Auto-Glob, warning: in untrained hands, may gum up clothes. Do NOT handle if you do not know how to use properly!" "Don't hit the trigger" tommy said, solemnly walking back to his seat, anger and sadness welling up in side him.
|
|
|
Post by ikima on Oct 19, 2009 17:51:02 GMT -5
(Another mistake... since when did the CHARACTER said he broke the rule of not calling her professor? It's not for nothing that I use the brackets here. It's to talk to someone out of the RP. Now your character talks like he knows everything.)
''An unwritten rule you have broken, dear... but yes, people will call me professor in here. Maybe you should have been a good boy and should have entered here normaly instead of this randomness.'' I say taking the gun and putting it under my desk. I then turn my head to look at both the new girl and the boy. ''Welcome you two.'' I tell them with a smile. ''Well, I think everyone is here, maybe a few are missing.'' I say sitting down and the bell finaly rings. ''I will be your teacher for the year, along with William at the back and you'll call me professor.'' I tell the students showing them William. ''Me and him will teach you how to role-play here. Maybe some of you are familiar with it, but some aren't. We will go step by step, one thing at a time, so no one has to rush.'' I tell everyone. ''Well, then I will let William introduce himself then each of you will do the same. Now if you may please introduce yourself, William.'' I say letting William talking now.
(As you may notice now, my character wants to let William talk, meaning you can't talk or else it won't fit in the RP since it's up to William to talk. Yes, sometime it can take long to wait for a reply, but it's just how it is, like a story. You can always reply, but you must do only little actions, yet they would be pointless since here, it's instant, meaning after I stop talking, William is supposed to be talking right away. Well, he will decide of his next action.)
|
|
|
Post by Nina the Collector on Oct 19, 2009 18:05:54 GMT -5
(Um... in a class room setting, its always possible for someone to talk, but it should only be done in whispers, but it will most likely end in the Teacher over hearing them and giving them trouble, would this be correct, Cuddle-Chan?)
The girl sits down in the seat beside William, nearest the window, She made a silent sigh of relief that she wasn't late for the last bell.
|
|
|
Post by ikima on Oct 19, 2009 18:14:10 GMT -5
(The only problem with that, is they should whisper when William is talking. Since it's instant, William would be talking right after I told him to introduce himself. Or they would be whispering before or at the same time as me. Yet the bell didn't ring so what would be the point of whispering then? The only reason they would whisper to someone would be to talk without the teachers hearing them since it could be a secret of something of the sort. Does that help you a little? ^^)
|
|
|
Post by Nina the Collector on Oct 19, 2009 18:21:49 GMT -5
(It helps me allot... thank you...)
|
|
|
Post by ikima on Oct 19, 2009 18:35:06 GMT -5
(Tom, it is something that isn't interesting to know especially in RP places. If you have nothing to say, then say nothing. Otherwise it could be considered spam.)
|
|
|
Post by Tom641 on Oct 19, 2009 19:06:52 GMT -5
(Yeah, good point. I'll delete that.)
|
|