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Post by emojar on Sept 30, 2009 20:10:56 GMT -5
I'm not gonna lie... I first read this and was like "WTH?" but now I understand, and I like it. ^^
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Post by The owner is perverted on Oct 1, 2009 14:48:39 GMT -5
It's short. But good.
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Post by Meredy_Chao on Oct 1, 2009 19:15:26 GMT -5
*nodnod*
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Post by The owner is perverted on Oct 2, 2009 14:13:42 GMT -5
I like short stories, but not real real short stories, but still. It's good.
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Post by lunarsolarsonic100 on Oct 3, 2009 9:01:14 GMT -5
Yeah, not bad.
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demon amy
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Post by demon amy on Oct 3, 2009 9:09:07 GMT -5
Nice story tom i like it a lot
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Post by Meredy_Chao on Oct 4, 2009 15:08:01 GMT -5
*nod* It's real good!
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Post by The owner is perverted on Oct 4, 2009 15:31:52 GMT -5
I like it still.
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Post by william on Oct 9, 2009 11:30:43 GMT -5
Wow besides the poor writing, the hard to understand plot, the lack of somewhat orginal ideas, the lack of caps, the poor placement of periods, the lack of details, the lack of intersting anything. If You got rid of all of this you would have...nothing. So basicly the whole story sucked >_>.
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Post by Meredy_Chao on Oct 9, 2009 14:12:50 GMT -5
Hmm..now that I think bouts it...I kinda gotta agree. The story has to have a plot, ect.
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